Q: relax with someone or alone?

According to a recent statistic on the internet, there are about 68 percent people choose to spend their spare time with friends. Due to this fact, some people hold the opinion that it will be a better choice to relax with other person considering it may bring them more happiness. However, others insist on spending time alone since it can create more quietness and freedom. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former idea.

One of the most significant points of relaxing with some people is that it enhances people's ability of cooperation. As a matter of fact, people can join a number of appealing activities, especially sports activities, such as soccer, basketball, baseball etc. All of those activities need a lot of people participate, in other words, the games ask players to be cooperative. Since there are various positions in each kind of games, players must understand their own roles and jobs clearly. When they play against another team they will certainly try their best to beat the rival, thus during the game they may learn how to cooperate well with teammates in order to make their working most efficient. In addition, we all know that cooperative people are more easily to find a job in large company which may lead to success in their future career.

Furthermore, spending time with other people definitely improves their relationship. For instance, when children spending time with their family they will have more chances to talk, communicate with their parents and grandparents. And as we all know that the more frequently we communicate with family members, the more harmonious relationship in family between us is. On the contrary, if people do everything alone, put it another way, avoid of connecting with any person, they may suffer some serious problems, to say nothing of having happiness. One of the terrible results is that nobody will understand them, people will not know what do they want or what do they need, on the other hand, in this situation those people may hate the society for the reason that they thought none cares about them.

Each coin has two sides, staying alone does have some minor benefits, especially when people consider it creates more freedom. However, never will I agree that it can compare to the aforementioned advantages. From what has been discussed, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is more advisable to relax with some people.

Accordingto a recent statistic on the internet, there are about 68 percentpeople choose to spend their spare time with friends. Due to this fact,some people hold the opinion that it will be a better choice to relaxwith other person considering it may bring them more happiness.However, others insist on spending time alone since it can create morequietness and freedom. As far as I am concerned, I completely agreewith the former idea.

Oneof the most significant points of relaxing with some people is that itenhances people's ability of cooperation. As a matter of fact, peoplecan join (in) a number of appealing activities, especially sportsactivities, such as soccer, basketball, baseball etc. All of thoseactivities need a lot of people participate(participants), in other words, the gamesask (request)players to be cooperative. Since there are various positions ineach kind of games, players must understand their own roles and jobsclearly. When they play against another team they will certainly trytheir best to beat the rival, thus during the game they may learn howto cooperate well with teammates in order to make their working(action) mostefficient. In addition, we all know that cooperative people are moreeasily to find a job in large company which may lead to success intheir future career.

Furthermore,spending time with other people definitely improves their relationship.For instance, when children spending(spend) time with their family they willhave more chances to talk, communicate(去掉一个) with their parents andgrandparents. And as we all know that the more frequently wecommunicate with family members, the more harmonious relationship infamily between us is. On the contrary, if people do everything alone,put it another way, avoid of connecting with any person, they maysuffer some serious problems, to say nothing of having happiness. Oneof the terrible results is that nobody will understand them, peoplewill not know what do they want or what do they need, on the otherhand, in this situation those people may hate the society for thereason that they thought(thinks) none cares about them.

Eachcoin has two sides, staying alone does have some minor benefits,especially when people consider it creates more freedom. However, neverwill I agree that it can compare to the aforementioned advantages. Fromwhat has been discussed, we may safely draw the conclusion that it ismore advisable to relax with some people.

请问我这些作文论点的设置和展开还行吗？ 谢谢

我觉得挺好的

谢谢啦！ 希望能考个理想的成绩