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[资料分享] TOEFL写作的总体概论(转贴)

本主题由 qifeihu 于 2008-8-19 00:38 设置高亮

TOEFL写作的总体概论(转贴)


写作策略:提前准备,不可依赖临场发挥
总体要求:
        首段写作  :别具一格
        主题句写作:亮点制造
        拓展段落  :追求流畅
        末段写作  :直接套用


首段写作的创新写法:
(1)
名人名言式
Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm. Ralph Waldo Emerson

“to be, or not to be, that is the question”


“to live in the countryside, or to live in the urban, that is
the question”


The foreign moon is rounder than the domestic one!


The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence.

注:一篇文章中的名人名言极限是三句。

(2)
排比发难式
Indoor activities and outdoor activities
Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou City? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridorf in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the Franrance Hill?
If you have never had such experience, you would never know how much fun outdoor activities could bring you.
Topic: money buy a car or go traveling?

(3)
个性的句子
in higher education, we do not need a vision of the perfect curriculum, the perfect text book, the perfect website, the perfect classroom, the perfect campus, the perfect homestudy, the perfect combination of media.

中间段落:
(1)
总结性强
when I woek in day time, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.
Outside enviroment during day time helps to improve efficiency in many ways.
(2)
避免低级错误
主题句的分项检查
(3)
避免绝对化
The senior is efficient
学会使用插入语
拓展段落:
(1)
科学数据法
(2)
假想事例
(3)
反面阐述
(4)
虚拟语气
(5)
举例论证
末段写作:
(1)
名人名言
(2)
以退为进
(3)
正面总结


注:在进入考场前结尾已准备好
虔诚开始
谦恭准备
寂寞酝酿
幸福收获

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谢谢doudou的分享
大家要记住开头的几句最为关键
写作策略:提前准备,不可依赖临场发挥
总体要求:
        首段写作  :别具一格
        主题句写作:亮点制造
        拓展段落  :追求流畅
        末段写作  :直接套用

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