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2 E3 y8 i3 F: BIf you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why?Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
( t; n. n0 S' N: e& d9 N+ |The Great Wall, the intellectual symbols of archaic (ancient) Chinese people, can be tracked to Qin Dynasty, which is considered to attain the peek power the in Chinese history. A large amount of Chinese people spent a thousand years to build this edifice (building) considered one of the miracles in the world. If I were asked to send one thing representing my country, transparently (obviously), I will send a symbol of Great Wall to an international exhibition. My reasons are listed below.2 H; N) [. u$ E; k" T" y
First of all, the Great Wall is a symbol of China. When we talk with foreigners referring to China, they would response the first thing that is the Great Wall owning to strongly sense(feeling) that the Great Wall is China and China is the Great Wall as well. Every years thousands of foreigners across different countries come to visit China, and the Great Wall is the first scenic plot (place) they choice. According the survey published by China Daily in the first season of 2008, half of foreigners claim that the most interesting scenic plot (legacy) of China is the Great Wall and a third of them want to go there if possible.
- ?( s; w+ R1 B0 B( p% V H% DSecond, to Chinese people, the Great Wall reflects the spirit fighting against invasion in any sort of times. In 1945, Chinese people fight against the Japanese invasion seeking the freedom. In that hard period, when we referred to the Great Wall, it played an significant role in pursuit of freedom of China encouraging us to fight with intrudes(入侵者).0 Y7 [7 `) \, C, C0 z
Finally, the Great Wall tends to refer to the traditional custom of China. It just likes a history book to show people who were visited there the yesterday of China. It could expand learners’ knowledge and widen their horizons, cultivating the capability to master the traditional civilization of China
; R" J1 L! P/ P4 X( gIn conclusion, this symbol representing our country to an international exhibition could put forward the spreading of traditional culture and make the foreigners better understand of China.
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