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原帖由 ginger_jj 于 2008-7-18 15:26 发表 ( Q* ]1 l* z! v
我听了好多次 因为效果不好所以反复听6 \: B6 I+ \4 i+ k. k+ R

# v& I" F) t; [3 c总的来说发音不准，有很多错的   梅花音和e 的发音分的不清楚。这点要注意
8 U: r) d* @/ ]- ?/ g3 m4 [还有你说的很快，貌似很连贯，但是连读和该省略的地方没有掌握好，希望达摩加油练n习，我觉得可 ...

相当的感谢！！！感动ing，达摩会继续努力的  x( v2 z! d- |
我每天都会上发，今天就只有晚上了，下午要去上班～
  E# P! |  ?+ n: n0 o 纠音！！！

Doing exercise every day is helpful to students' health. 这句话里 exercise ，helpful 省读了以后都不知道事这个单词了。I think health will go with us for a long life if we insist on exercising everyday. It is helpful for us to focus the energy on study and work.  这两句话有点拗口，可以在拗口的地方停顿一下，everyday 发音不是很准。 （Second, doing exercise is the best way to relax. ）这句话 second ，best ， relax 3个单词发音不对。It helps us to reduce stress and release tension.
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: e. @* W( V& G2 E: V3 O8 C7 i　Music is also the best way to help me escape stress and trouble. （You know, L&N不分） stress is the biggest enemy of the （health 发音不对）. Music can bring me lots of pleasure and turn my blue mood to a bright one. When I am listening music, I can forget all the difficulties of stress life
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% x. E# ?' s4 h最后一点就是希望达摩同学发音的时候，元音要饱满，你说的时候单词像一个一个在往外蹦，很着急似的。英音较重
2 P9 {' m5 [$ K2 K% T& @6 ]6 a# ]加油啊~！衷心祝福达摩同学以后能操一口流利的美语。

/e/这个音几乎都发成/i/了...
) m1 g) w. {7 j- f; j; i长元音不饱满甚至都没发出来，比如exercise work release blue mood' s) P5 A0 y( }5 w
th这个音要咬舌滴7 x5 {# y/ z" v& _% B2 ?
/v/音也不对...
. I4 {1 |$ F7 a) ^" t8 d...还有好多，追速度吞音严重. {; X" {. N& C- D6 U2 O
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祖师爷要从音标开始纠正呀...

昨天的 不尽人意 我坚持上传 黑死人就算我的 ) r/ Z" v4 F1 V* y7 `$ c
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From my point of view, I believe comedy is my favorite art.
: O8 J, U% y/ n- p; x" OOne great thing about it is that the comedy can develop my sense of humor. I mean, by watching an interesting comedy, I could learn how to be humorous in my life and accumulate some humors to share with my friends. Humorous talk will make my opinion attractive and tempting and bring more fun to my life and others’.
9 L6 w6 y; I# ]; bAnother point worth mentioning is the relaxation it brings to me. Some great comedies are extremely funny and they never fail to make me laugh. Laugh can definitely help me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study.4 u6 A4 X3 e2 t+ E- d: X
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I’d like to make friends with the people who share the same love for the same comedies, such as Forest Gump. We can have a little get-together, we talk, laugh, discuss and we all feel like one big family.
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; @. x: b, w% ]" R( S[ 本帖最后由 达达摩摩 于 2008-7-19 00:34 编辑 ]

今天我觉得能听懂多了～　呵呵，达达加油～　* H' }' \, r5 `! }: g/ o' A
记得你的录音文本要提交哦～

提交是撒子意思？？5 j' d  X& q6 q! p; R
汗你解决问题！！
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$ {3 J& r) Z1 y& j, Z  J6 o) p[ 本帖最后由 joycebi 于 2008-7-19 00:59 编辑 ]

就是你说的东西的文字档，你那个问题解决了～

祖师爷你不能再读了，读成习惯就不好纠正，学音容易改音难，你必须要从音标开始纠正

呵呵 倾城的话太经典了 呵呵
- A# G, F5 C- z. d9 e" XTO达达： 说的时候带有感情一点 你说每个句子基本都是一个音调下来的 没有轻重之分 所以就不好听出来你在说什么 尽管有可能你每个音都发对了 别泄气啊 慢慢来啊 加油

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原帖由 Ttian 于 2008-7-19 20:24 发表
# F! }8 x" ], i% t9 w祖师爷你不能再读了，读成习惯就不好纠正，学音容易改音难，你必须要从音标开始纠正

哭死了