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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
Opinions on the issue of teenagers having jobs are divided—not only does it trigger debates among people, but also countries are involved in this heated issue and laws are passed in different countries to either support or forbid the practice. However, the apparent solidity of the argument that teenagers are too young to afford a job and such a responsibility can possibly detract them from their study makes some unable to separate reality from fiction, preventing teenagers from adapting to the real world at an early stage of their lives.
Teenagers are constantly in a process of experiencing novelties and familiarizing the world. Responsibility is the number one lesson they should learn in order to control their own fate and live life to its fullest. Having a half-time job forces students to make good balance between their studies and their work, thus contributing to their sense of responsibility toward their time and work habits. Being responsible and conscious of the situation one is in ensures that one is heading to the right direction and is prepared to deal with any unexpected hardships. This, of course, is best established when one is still young as students, constantly perceiving the world and getting the most out of it.
Also, those students who are meticulously taken care of by their parents can experience a strong sense of independence once they fly out of their little cradles at home. Psychological studies have shown that the “Little Emperor Syndrome”, one’s inability in the world socially as a result of over-caring by parents, is largely reduced if parents can let out their children at an early age to work for and feed themselves. Just as a fledgling bird must experience strong winds and look for food independently, a teenager must be put in the society to associate with people and earn his own living. If not, the inability to adapt to the society will be impending which is quite disastrous when parents one day can no longer take care of their immature children.
It may be dangerous to assert that it goes without any problems for teenager to have jobs. Counteractive results might emerge such as the insecurity for teenagers to step into the society and the negative influence they may get from the assorted world. But clear is the fact that teenagers must learn to be accustomed to all these possibilities and be independent so as to be a strong person both physically and mentally.
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