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014 Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

Although the most important thing that students should is to studying hardly, which means attend classes regularly, I think an optional schedule for students will benefit them more, because they can study out of their interest, learn more from practical
life and excel themselves.

First, studying out of interest makes students study more hard. As the old saying goes "interest is the best teacher", when someone is interested, he/she will be eager to acquire knowledge and skills about it. There are a lot of evidences that can prove it. Edison, as one of the most famous inventor in last century, was interested by a lot of strange things but he did not get high score in his examination when he was a child. It is those interests which lead his do a lot of strange thing such as put eggs in his body when he get asleep. It demonstrates that a serious interest can result in a student who love ask question and have the courage to find the reason.

Second, optional studying schedule gives student more opportunities to connect the theories which they acquire from books and lecture to the practical life. Nobody will be useful if he/she only know how to learn the knowledge instead of put them in his/her real life. What really improves the development of our society is doing more practice job. Furthermore, doing job outside the academic world also makes students love studying and pay attention to how to study effectively. A must of internship is out of this reason. So, from this angle, obeying the flexible schedule is better than permanent schedule.

Finally, doing a job in classroom only means a good skill on learning, while doing a good job both inside and outside the classroom stands for a good ability of doing useful job and it can make a person excel himself in pursuit of high goals. There are some evidences which can support it. Bill Gates, as an extreme example, who is used to be the richest man in the world, dropped this chance of getting education. If he was dominant by the required class, I think he has no energy and time to do his invention let alone to run a business. So, if you are a man who wants to excel yourself, you'd better keep your own routine instead of attending classing regularly.

In summary, I think what we need is a flexible schedule for our own, but not keep out step in classes.

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Although the most important thing that students should (do)is to studying(study) hardly(hard), which means attend(attending) classes regularly, I think an optional schedule for students will benefit them more, because they can study out of their interest, learn more from practical
life and excel themselves.


First, studying out of interest makes students study more hard(怎么还是study hard……可以换个别的词). As the old saying goes "interest is the best teacher", when someone is interested(in sth.?), he/she will be eager to acquire (the)knowledge and skills about it. There are a lot of evidences that can prove it. Edison, as one of the most famous inventor in (the)last century, was interested by a lot of strange things but he did not get high score in his examination when he was a child. It is those interests which lead his do(him to do ) a lot of strange thing(things) such as put(putting) eggs in his body when he get(got) asleep. It demonstrates that a serious interest can result in a student who love(loves) ask(asking) question(s) and have the courage to find the reason(s).(这段用了多少个interests啊……)(觉得例子也不是很有说服力……)



个人认为,条理清晰结构完整挺不错的,不过语言问题比较多……都没勇气再一点点改下去了。有些问题很明显,有些问题我也不是很确定,再等别人拍拍LZ综合下意见吧,不好意思哦~



[ 本帖最后由 heycinderella 于 2008-7-26 11:12 编辑 ]

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