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[写作求拍] 大大我几天之后就要奔托了 帮我看看作文好吗?

大大我几天之后就要奔托了 帮我看看作文好吗?

178. The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.



Now we have step into a new millennium, I am dear to predict that there will be more changers in the world. And these changes will take place in the information technology, global business and national culture.



In the past decades, computer have should the responsibility of changing the way of information organization. Now computers companied with internet are changing the information technology. Information highway now is connecting individuals all around the world. Sooner or later, information will be universally available to anyone has computer. We will not have to go to library to do research, we will not have to travel to visit somebody, and we will not have to go to bookstore to buy a book. We call do all of these thing form our homes on the computer.



In the past decades, many multinational companies have established. In the future, the business will tend to be more international. Companies will funnel their attention into exploring the cross-national market; they will try their best the meet the demand of patrons from all over the world. An increasing number of products will be distributed in the cross-national market; individuals form all over the world can buy the same products and receive the same service.



In the past, people align with each other base on race, nevertheless, the differences between nations will diminish. Since internet have narrowed the distant between individuals, we will know more about people in other countries, we will have more common interest, and we will accept the difference between each other. We will tend to be more and more alike; even we come from different countries, speak different languages, and have different color of skin. The world culture is forming. In the future, ethnic discrimination will no exist; sexual segregation will be the things in the past, as well as regional isolation will no longer be a problem.



Time will continue changing, so do our lives. The new millennium will bring us so many wonderful changes. And these changes will happen in information technology, global business and national culture. All these changes will lead us to a brand new world.

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a brand new world?(最后几个词)
narrow 是变窄,怎么narrow distant?
will no exist?
我觉得句式还可以多变一点。
你自己再多看看。

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这样的内容很不错了呀~我要是也这样就好了~

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I am dear to predict  确定有这种说法吗。。。

In the past decades, computer have should the responsibility of...
should 改成 shouldered

funnel their attention。。。。funnel是什么意思

有几个打字错误 LZ应该自己能发现。。

看了之后很受启发。。。水平很高啊

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呵呵 不好意思 shoulder 是打错了 funnel~into 将什么灌注于什么之中 funnel efforts into study 将全部精力灌注于学业

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