DELTA quiz 7 第 442  页 综合写作
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The reading material introduces some information about pictorial photograph. And the lecture gives more detailed statement about the elements of composition in pictorial photograph. The professor gives points from balance, placement, color, and detail to support the ideas of reading.

The first point that the lecture supports is that photographer’s success in the composition. The professor states that all of the elements in the photograph are well composed which have a good impact. We can see that photographers in the nineteenth century inherited theories of composition not only from artists, but also from other visual artists. The rules were abstracted from the paintings by teachers, which are very useful for the beginners of photograph.

And then, the professor states detailed information about the elements of composition, which are balance, placement, color, and detail. As for the balance, the professor mentions that balance should be reflected in every aspect, such as in the light and dark areas, and etc. Then the professor gives idea about placement. To this point, the lecture mentions the location of main characters, which should be posited as the four point above or below strong do. The third point is color, the professor gives some examples about warm and cold color. Warm color should be strong such as red. Also blue is one kind of cold color. The final point is detail, the photograph should be more satisfied in detail. Those four points give strong support to idea in the reading material about the basic elements of photograph.

At the end of the lecture, the professor gives one example which can be a best stand for the essence of photograph in 19th century. It has a white house, a few sea birds, blue sky, and etc. The professor emphasizes that all elements are essential in one photograph, which illustrated the idea in the reading that composition refers to the organization of forms and colors.

The reading material introduces some information about pictorial photograph. And the lecture gives more detailed statement about the elements of composition in pictorial photograph. The professor gives points from balance, placement, color, and detail to support the ideas of reading.

The first point that the lecture supports is that photographer’s success in the composition. The professor states that all of the elements in the photograph are well composed which have(s) a good impact(这句话很拗口，不知所云). We can see that photographers in the nineteenth century inherited theories of composition not only from painting artists, but also from other visual artists. The rules were abstracted(应该是这个吧absorbed，我怎么看不懂呢？) from the paintings by teachers, which are very useful for the beginners of photograph.

And then, the professor states detailed information about the elements of composition, which are balance, placement, color, and detail. As for the balance, the professor mentions that balance should be reflected in every aspect, such as in the light and dark areas, and etc（用such as 就没有etc ）. Then the professor gives idea about placement. To this point, the lecture mentions the location of main characters, which should be posited as the four points above or below strong do. The third point is color, the professor gives some examples about warm and cold color. Warm color should be strong such as red. Also blue is one kind of cold color. The final point is detail, the photograph should be more satisfied in detail. Those four points give strong support to idea in the reading material about the basic elements of photograph.

At the end of the lecture, the professor gives one example which can be a best stand for the essence of photograph in 19th century. It has a white house, a few sea birds, blue sky, and etc. The professor emphasizes that all elements are essential in one photograph, which illustrated the idea in the reading that composition refers to the organization of forms and colors.

总体来说，语言没有什么问题，写的很好，而且可以看出你的听力水平很高。但是我想提醒一点就是你虽然记下了很多听力的东西，但是我觉得你没有太多引用reading passage 里面的东西，所以我觉得这是你文章的最大缺陷。
我的qq是123523000，加我吧，我们可以对这篇文章进行进一步讨论。

不好意思，前一段时间一直没有上网，所以没有看到你改的。

嗯~谢谢
很中肯~
已经加了你的Q了