我生平的第一篇文章，希望哥哥姐姐帮忙改改。
题目OG练习的独立，该独立还是和父母多住些时间。( A3 ` x0 G/ h' \- [9 z. ?5 }0 [
小弟开学就高2了，大哥 大姐姐给我改改吧，10月就考了。
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There has long been issue among families that weather would let yong adults live with their parents for a longer time,or let them independent.It is faily clear that more and more young adults want independentce from their parents as soon as possible.But i want to point out,let them live with parents is better.The advantage of this I will illustrate by following four paragraph.
* T2 _8 h: m" r- l5 V: @4 U Why does idea of independence loom so large in the young adults? Surely because the seduction of the society appeal to them.The varieties of seduction of the society are infinite,it inclouds many bad influence.If young adults didin't live with their parents at that time,they would been unalbe to judge thing which can make bad influence on them.So it is better for young adults spent more time to live with parents before they can judge things correctly.
4 V) ~/ m, P7 w: A/ G. z We all konw if a young adults without an eduction from their parents,many of us believe,he is an unfortunate victim of adverse circumstance.Why i say this? Because if let young adults independent at very early age.they will have no enough time to learn many veay necessary habit,like punctuality,respect to all people,and even to be a patriot. All of those can make them outstanding in their school or in their job. Also if they without educating those from their parents ,they might be ill-mannered,presumptuous,or fatuous.Depending on this factor,it is necessary for young adults to grow up.& T& i. }) f5 C
The last advantage is that when an young adult work or study busily,they will have no enough time to prepare meal or clean their own room.Those can make an young adult life uncomfortable.IF they live with their parent,that will never happen. Young adults live with their parents,are always available for an informal chat or an evening's entertainment.Going shopping is also pleasant.You can find out from these,live with parent is better for young adult to have fun.& F% r* R Z& F
Why a young adult are prepared to tolerate solitude each day for the dubious privilege of independence is beyong me. I though it is ont only better way bu also necessary for young adults to live their parents for longer time./ X( h/ F- c0 q/ R7 Z
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