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[写作求拍] 8.24考试,求拍啊!

8.24考试,求拍啊!

Nowadays, more and more students try their best to attend college or university, why they are longing for it? Different people hold different perspectives, but for my account, there are three reasons for it.

First, attending college will give us a great chance to gain a better life. With the knowledge we learn from university we can better understand the world we live. For example, we can have more clear awareness when we encounter the transformation gene plant, how to deal with it, whether it better for our life and worse to our health? Also, I am one of few people who can attend to university. Most of my classmates who cannot go to university have worked in a small factory in my hometown. And now with the experience of university and knowledge I have the opportunity to work in the well known tourist city, and have enough money buy a house of myself, that means I and my children have opportunity to enjoy the facilities of the city provides.

In addition, in my opinion, attending university can help us get a good job. It is essential to us to get massive opportunity of a decent job. Our university provides us several courses to improve our skill for careers, and a lot of information of job in your major. So with the skill, knowledge and information, we are more likely to get a decent job with more satisfaction. Can you imagine a graduate student majoring in biology still do cleaning in the street. It is believed that he sits in his office and do his research, enjoying air-condition. Compared with those who have no university experience, university students are more likely to have a decent job. So university experience is critical to students to get a good job.

The third reason for attending university is to increase knowledge. Obtain knowledge is a wonderful thing for me. When I can solve a problem of chemistry, learn to the history of my country, I can enjoy the great delight. Also knowledge expands our eyesight by informing us lot of new things what we cannot gain from our common life or experience.

As far as I'm concerned, attending university can help me get a decent job, a better further of my life and more knowledge. Hence, it is necessary for students to try their best to complete their university and get more knowledge and a colorful future!

大家也帮忙看下我的,谢谢了!

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Nowadays, the number of factories which builded in communities is on the rise. And there is a growing awareness of both the positive and negitive influence that the construction plans brings to our community. Considerble the advantages that setting up a factory in our community are, they cannot compete with the benefits that no factory in my community when pollution and traffic acidency are taken into consideration.

Even though there may be one or two advantages to build a factory in our neigberhood, however, I believe that there are far more disadvantages. It is true that establishing a new factory will cause pollution. As we all know, a factory will give off a lot of exhasit air, which will harm to the resident in our community. A recent study taken by scientists indicates that people living in a neigberhood with a factory are likely to suffer respiratory disease. By comparation with inhabitant who living in a community which has no factory, the rate of suffering respiratory disease increased 20 percent. Also, a great of noise pollution and light pollution also affect our physical and mental health, such as making our ear and eyes less sensitive, give us much mental pressure more easily to angery. Hence, I will not hesitate to refuse the plan of factory construction in my neigherhood.

In addition, the constuction of a new factory will increase the traffic borden near our community. After a new factory established, then more people will come to our community and traffic accident will absolutely grow. I will more worry about my children’s safety when they playing in my neigberhood, even only leave they in home. Therefor they will lost more happiness playing with their neigbers and classmates. Besides, it is dangerous for us to have a walk in the park and relax in our community. As far as I am conserned, I hold the belief that there are more negitive influence to build a new factory in our community.

The few benefits of constructing a new factory in our community include both creating of jobs and convenience of life. A new factory will decrease the rate of unemployment of our community. The construction of a new factory also gives a good chance for the development of other business in our community. For instance there will more supermarkets and restaurants in our community, and it is so convenience that it does not necessary to have a long way for shopping.

Although I agree that there may be one or two merits to build a new factory in our community, I maintain that the disadvantages are more obvious. It causes more pollution and traffic accidents in our community, both of which do harm to our healthy.

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帮忙改下吧,实在不会写了。谢谢了!

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好的,谢谢

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