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上午：练taekwondo发泄来着
4 V* D+ u* N+ w$ d4 E- F* }* \下午：听写场景下历史第二篇，# X. P2 p+ U% m
晚上：写作加阅读
) H. ^, M- X2 n6 B  O) H听写了两篇，补上昨天的，第二篇整理好了，没跟度，第三篇整理一半没时间了，
1 H, `0 P" ~0 g9 l要看阅读和写作。0 u% S# E! u3 A1 j/ m

4 R7 k2 w( K5 }3 v3 @[ 本帖最后由 功夫熊猫2 于 2008-8-30 21:03 编辑 ]

昨天看了阅读og,type 9觉得好难，准备ps 和recommendation了，写作没看。 觉得可用的时间太少了，
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今天是八月最后一天了，只剩一个月准备了。
$ c9 P5 Y+ }9 Y' |0 a上午：单词复习了24-25没看新内容。2 \: g/ o. y( Y4 n" v6 ~
下午：跟读历史第三篇，还要听写第四篇
1 n: o5 i. ~: u; P晚上：要看写作了，和阅读og.继续写ps recommedation
; e/ u2 L, U! [4 g2 p2 f请各位拭目以待

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天呐，* R6 x5 [# Y! E' z0 t
我要重新整理备考计划了
" I/ V9 k0 H) A+ D上午：一个小时单词，口语35高频，（先完成这些，10号之前）
6 Q: p3 E& N: F1 S下午：听写，做听力og
: _7 w! S  }( z* _3 _# |晚上：写作满分，阅读og加老托。
1 S+ T" i7 s- G$ t; k1 W得快点了，没时间了，救命啊
, @- X6 d: S( m& C- G3 K我要区看阅读了( V  I" ^4 b/ X  K* a

: b, q4 O/ ^- ?+ w7 ~[ 本帖最后由 功夫熊猫2 于 2008-9-1 21:28 编辑 ]

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2 X/ x2 D6 [* N, wIf you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use specific examples to support your answer.0 d) z3 A8 z, \8 {/ g9 o+ r/ F
我觉得这篇文章改得太好了。! D+ C* ]9 P" a7 z
总分总
+ F# I& V, {5 [: D1 C" @4 e第一分段：写得是人书比例太小。原文作者写得是图书馆数量太少，能看书的人少，借书经常发生矛盾，学生没有机会从图书馆借书。专家意见：人书比例太少，access to books is hard for people who don't have cars ,it's difficult to obtain books in large demand,and the process for obtaining the library card is cumbersome,many students are excluded.1 k+ x1 n9 u  q# i! Q# \
第二分段：作者写了一段，专家改了两段，内容更丰富，说理更详细。原文作者写了两点：书的种类和现代化技术的应用。专家：书的种类与作者反应的一样，但是更丰富，the range of material,reference book,foreign work,audiovisual collections,fiction collection第二点，internet and information technology,which can save patron's time and makes it easy to order books from other districts.And library should provide patrons with access to internet.  Y, b8 {. w% M; z; M( J) d
又写了一下外观，the appearance is dingy,.这个是回应总段的in bad shape
: a6 J+ I6 F$ b, @8 p( `. S总：if i had a chance to ...i would..现在的问题，shortage of libraries and they're in bad shape and poorly equipped.提出重要性。9 v% ~) M" X8 i5 ]9 h
总：our city needs a good library system,and it is important in community and to children.they need knowledge ,so funds to libraries would broaden their horizon.* p4 ~2 d8 o6 r
语言点归纳：( P/ E: P. u0 s1 ^8 o- y
if it was my right to choose one thing to be changed about my hometowen,i would no doubt make my preferenct of building..
3 }9 Z( j6 a( @" J改为: if i had a chance to change one thing about my hometown,i would improve its system of libraries
8 ?# W7 e$ ^5 h& `9 athe low ratio of books to people  I; c4 I# U$ U. W

2 N& M' l( N  `3 u- ~7 W" ]  p- ?We are far behind cities of comparable size in this respect.
) J- u% H( @% n3 X$ W; Caccess to books ,obtain books,the process for obtaining a library card,do with some improvement需要
) d, b, ?; O0 uas things stand now什么意思？
% ~1 }% l  j# r* w% K$ lsteer toward, d2 l- O) g) m" A; h4 M
upkeep,staffing,information technology,new acquisition
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[ 本帖最后由 功夫熊猫2 于 2008-9-1 21:27 编辑 ]

as things stand now按目前的情况看来
3 v# K2 v5 [. @6 U6 m' D4 h熊猫很强的说

谢谢，达达
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8 p" ^) M' v& m! ~% @8 x上午：改ps，读口语35，找感觉，并准备段子，单词26－27，
) N" Z' a0 @: M下午：听力og,听写。% m# F; Z; `1 l3 d. M, D6 q; v9 C
晚上：阅读og set 1(两天一个set)写作满分。
& v' L( I* W) {: v% G( j2 N3 W请拭目以待0 j+ O; `6 O4 n9 P4 Z' I6 L
单词，听力og没完成，看阅读去啦
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[ 本帖最后由 功夫熊猫2 于 2008-9-2 21:59 编辑 ]

How do movies and television influence people's behavior?
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0 _6 d4 N& ^* x9 p6 {: D总：原文（they have significantly influence on people's behavior.people want to look up to role models.in dress,act or react and the way they speak)专家（have significantly influence on people's behavior.kinds of characters such as models ,detectives .. someone is ready to imitate them.)% {7 Y0 V' E$ c5 x# Z1 I  E2 Z
第一个分：原文（movies and television influence the way of dressing,role models are examples for people's way of dressing.for exa,3)专家(influence is people's desire to dress like idols.such as 3)
' _, o! C3 X, i# R第二个分：原文（acting and reacting.acting style on the movies and television.such as music ,objects and live.and also love,learn lessons from them.)专家（accents and patterns of speech.for example 3,accent and whole conversation
$ q* R5 e' l7 ?* }第三个分：原文(a big impact in the way we speak.learn the accent of chow.that will make them interesting and help them achieve dreams of being somebody.)8 T/ |7 N  R6 ]/ Y) Q1 S
专家（affect of worldview,values,consequent behavior,examples 3,)
/ q0 s4 d; T9 D' R- d& U2 T: \/ W) z总：原文观点中立，专家观点反应了不良现象和人们的反感，强调影响很大
/ I+ i8 a- h3 R后两个分点专家意见更好。
( A$ ^/ j& [* @5 p( {" Y& X; CIndeed, some actors are hard to distinguish from the people they play.7 i  A" a: f+ }* H3 G
？什么意思
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PANDA 加油1

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" s5 j1 L, U3 C. x: G日子邻近，却什么都没干，心有余，而力不足。1 W. K# |0 G0 R2 }, O5 F+ o$ [
上午：口语35，两篇，单词26－27没完
* I2 k$ H; l3 i" ~下午：听力og ,gist,课堂录音一小时，之前听过了
2 d1 B6 O" G# `晚上：写作满分，阅读practice set 1复习
! f. c2 R( u1 L- g: h  NTelevision has destroyed communication among friends and family.
; ?9 c1 A2 P2 }5 y' W6 t5 F总分总：7 k4 X' a5 Q( m5 O4 v1 a+ a4 G
总：原文（disagree with the statement.it's widely believed that..but i think ..)2 T( G$ D% v5 T6 f
专家（....but i don't think television is entirely responsible)" R+ r& I0 O* K$ M. h0 p( m
第一分：原文（television doesn't entirely take away time that should spent among family and friends .life is all about choices,television is one replacement but not the only one of communication.for ex,tired of it or other important things)8 ?' z$ ]" n% q1 d" D. [+ P
专家（we cannot blame television for wasting our time.the possible factors compel people apart from each other are career and education.ex,and this doesn't need television.but shouldn't waste time in front of the screen.)
3 p8 b3 h, p" t% P) l, J第二分：原文(television provide opportunity for family to communicate.ex)
0 [3 E: V. M5 b$ j, t" f8 O专家(负面影响，the whole family sit in front of the television,not speaking to one another,but ,there are good programme for the family to discuss)
3 ^0 a. |$ f2 f+ A# d* q第三分;原文（the technology makes television a good way to make friends.ex)( [' b; L3 H6 B& E$ h4 |8 W
专家（technology provides ways of communication.for ex,home video,and telephone featured screen,good programme)我不觉得第三部分与主题有关。说得是电视，最后一段写的网络视频，有关系吗？& k( q& G$ e% Z7 ]
总：专家的最后一段看不懂

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天哪,9.4啦，不知不觉
- \- F1 _1 H" Z5 [6 N# Fsome people prefer to live in a small town.others prefer to live in a big city.What place would you like to live in?9 [  M' m" u6 K4 |8 k
总分总：
9 l' H6 }- F" f& F# b- f7 r, V总：原文（表明观点,my reasons will be detailed as follows.)专家（表明观点，i grew up in a delightful one myself.below i describe some of the striking contrasts i have found)
6 b5 Q8 c: H7 [$ {第一分：原文（there is less pollution in a small town than in a city.breathing fresh air
* P  r% P" u% C is good for health.具体阐明，besides,(ex)villagers are strong physically than city dwellers.i would like to have good health to live longer）
0 m0 _; b" s: h" E& {专家（i put a premium on my health.there is much more pollution in a city than in a town.i would like to ...,)
' m. l5 r! z. t第二分：原文（living expense ,i want to save money,比较..the same purchase is more expensive in a city than in a small town,for ex)
" ^* W1 F7 _  J专家（the city doesn't seem to be good for my emotion.while the town is quiet,peaceful and friendly ,the  city creats  physical and emotional stress .for ex.especially the crime .拿出small town做比较。）（the practical matter of expense.i want to save money.i can do that well in a small town,...many of the expenses in the city seems wasteful.2ex)
2 N! d) h/ j+ f2 Q# h# R4 w第三分：原文（the small town provides better enviornment and scenery,开始比较...)
. l" d! |. m; q1 J9 X) E" l& H9 Z& ]专家（small towns are more beautiful  than   big cities.比较）2 E9 W. [- @9 m# y4 Q
总：原文（总结前三个理由，living in a small town is my preference rather than...)
$ }4 m. g& D) L$ X( q专家（承认城市的好处...,but there is no need to be there for these reasons,适量就好，做出选择）