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10月12号考,第一篇作文,跪求大侠们批改

10月12号考,第一篇作文,跪求大侠们批改

Do you agree or disagree the followingstatement that:Being happy with your work is more important than high salary?
Recently, the issue of people should choosea career they are happy with or a job with a high salary has broght a hit debate on internet.Contrary to theopinion of many people is my heartfelt objection to choose a happy job over awell-paid one.The reasons are as follows.
To start with, considering the brutalcompetetion in our society, well paid job is difficult to obtain, but theinterests of the job is eaier to cultivated.A lately investigation shows thatnearly  ten percent newly graduatedcollege students can not find a job in 2000 ,and that number has doubled thisyear.As a result of population growth and globalization, the competetion weface is more and more severe now, the job available is already decreasing, theopenings for high salary job are even rare.So if we have the opportunity toobtain a decent job, we should catch that no matter we like the job or not.Andas long as we have an opimistic attitude, the bright side of the job will bediscovered graduately .Therefore, to gain a high salary job is much harder thanto find the interests of the job.
Moreover, when people have families, theyshould consider money more rather than their happiness of the job ,regardingthe responsibility on their shoulder. Nowadays, the dilemma of choosing a highsalary job or a happy job is not only the problem of employees in a family, itis also a problem for other family members,since the decision would affact themdirectily. For example, if a bread winner in a family perfered a low-salary jobwhich he or she could obscure happiness to a well-paid job which he or sheprobabaly is not interested in, the result will be the children in that familyhave no opportunity to receive a further education since they can not affordit.Will any responsible parents let this happen to their belovedchildren?Obviousely, the answer is no.Hence, instead of affacting the singleperson,working also influcences the family members who called you “bread winner”,a high salary will be a better response to them.
Admittedly, prefering high-salary job to ahappy one could bring problems to some people.For example, people who are notused to handle pressures could feel stressful when they are doing somethingthey are no interests in,and people who failed to cultivate emotion to the highsalary job might not have motivation to make progresses.However, a few waterdrops can not change the hight of the sealevel, those individuals hardly haveimpact on the whole pictures.
Judging from all points offered above, wemay safely draw the conclusion that even though there are may be one or twodisadvantages to prefering a high salary job to an interesting one, theadvantages far outweight them when the fierce competetion of society and thereponsibilities of supporting the family are taken into consideration.

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Recently, the issue of 这里是否应该用whether呢?我总是不会写这种句子,但是需加一个连词是肯定的。people should choose a career they are happy with or a job with a high salary has broght brought a hit debate on internet. Contrary to the opinion of many people is my heartfelt objection to choose a happy job over awell-paid one.这是例句么?学习了。The reasons are as follows.

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