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[写作求拍] 第49个话题,关于communication的文章,谢谢各位指教~~

第49个话题,关于communication的文章,谢谢各位指教~~

Is a face to face communication better than the other types of communication?

Stepping into the new era, we human beings gradually have more and more types of communication day by day. Letter can be the oldest one, and we also own telegram, telephone, internet, and the list will go on. Seeing that face to face communication is becoming rare among people, making acquaintances be stranger, some people may assert that we should be back to the nature, and do more face to face communication. Isn’t it really the best for people’s communication? My answer is absolutely unanimous with it.
Human beings are all emotional animals. Through the face to face communication, people can transfer our feelings, which can hardly achieved by the cool computer monial. Letters and telephone may deliver our sentiment as well, however, its ability is limited because it can only be words. On the contrary, people are able to use some body languages when they’re face to face. Take lovers for example, surely they could write some love letters and make a long call to say how much they love each other. But, can it be compared with the kisses and the sweet hugs? Exactly no!
Sometimes we would find that embarrassed when misunderstanding others’ words from sending the mobile phone message or those from the MSN. One of the reasons is that sentences can be spoken through different tones. Only a simple ‘OK’ will express distinctive emotions. When you speak in a certain voice, you may be happy to agree with someone’s idea; When you speak it lowly, chances are that you feel unwilling and depress. We can find that language is of great interest, for it could be accompanied with different collocation as well as be spoken in different tones expressing ideas that far apart.
We always hear some stories about the lonely parents who have outstanding sons and daughters, merely be at home. Letters or phone calls are good, how about the face to face communication? Be back home one or more times, have some more chat with our parents, that may be the best presents they need.

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这个月底就考,希望各位指点一二~~感激不尽~~

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语言还需要雕琢,own 用的不太好,改个句型吧,还有more andmore在第一句最好不要用了,太频繁了,尽管是informal essay说话也要正是一些,we human being等等就太口语了,rare不太合适,less used也许好点,making acquaintances be stranger,这是用金山快译的结果?还是friends好点吧。。 语言就让版主们说吧,但是结构一定要遵照point-proof-example的结构如果你不是在显示创造力的话呵呵,结构是最主要的在英语写作中,就说这么多,祝你取得好成绩

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gradually have more and more types of communication day by day. day by day he gradually重复

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