Og上面的practice
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young audlts prefer to live with their families for a longer time.Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
提纲：事例开头
1 young audlt已经足够具备独立生活的能力 人生观价值观已经形成 不会轻易受到外界的不良诱惑 所以尽早离开家不会构成威胁
2 及早离开家 即早学会独立 急躁融入社会 可以获得丰富的生活经验
3 虽然离开父母的照顾会让生活变的些许不便 但是培养的独立精神正式社会所需要的 这为今后的人生打下基础 父母不能陪伴我的度过一生 所以我们要尽早学会独立
My sister Jane left home a few days ago.It was a significant decision for our family that our parents have discussed it for a long time since none of us had been lived out of home at the age of twenty before. As far as I am concerned, Jane's leaving is a
great beginning for us to be independence as soon as possible.
Frankly speaking, old enough as the young adults are, they are capable to live alone and take care of themselves. Their value of life and most of the habits are formed which will not influence easily by others.Parents need not to be worried about whether they make friends with bad guys, or whether they do homework on time.Jane's best friend, Lily, who started her independent life one year ago, is a good example.She make friend with someone who has common language with her. Her life is arranged regularly and colorfully.
What's more, the earlier young adults leave their parents, the more independence and rigid they are. Without parents, not only will they challenge numbers of things they have not done before,such as cooking, doing housework and washing clothes,but also let them spend more time with their friends during their spare time to make them have more friends. All of the living expenses earned by themselves,meanwhile, acknowledge them how hard their parents get money. Moreover, they could be in society earlier and acquire abandant living experience.For example, how to do some simple repairments, how to save money from daily fees, how to arrange time to be more efficiency.
Unconvience though without parents is, sometimes, it really makes the young adults more independence than before. .Such spirit is just the society needs.Like lily said to me, when you are sick, there is nobody who is to care for you,what you have to do is to see the doctor yourself and keep healthy to escape illness again. A one year out-home experience makes her look like a real adult, and never be the little girl who is extremely effemination.Now she gets a good job and undertake all the expenses for her life.
What's the young adults experiencing and pracitising is a good basic for their future life. No one can depend on his parents until he is old.As a result , to learn to be independence as soon as possible play an necessary role for our lives.
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感谢各位严厉的批评指点 小土豆在此感激不尽！！！
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本帖最后由 foreverlxl 于 2008-10-7 10:38 编辑 ]
