第一次发作文，水平很差，不知如何提高
11月分要考托福了，作文水平一直不知如何提高，望各位高人相助，给提提意见，谢谢了！
这篇是185上的第27篇，题目是agree or disagree people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing.
People are always confronted with things that they do not enjoy doing.Cowards choose to avoid them while successful people choose to deal with them and gain valuable experience from them.One hot topic being discussed is whether people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy.If I were asked,Iwould say’by all means!’
For people who struggle against porverty,finding a labor work which is rather tough to raise their familier is their choices.After one-day work,they will feel exhausted,and,compared with what they pay,the money they earn is surprisingly low.It’s cystal-clear that they don’t enjoy this kind of job.Nevertheless,in order to convert their fates,they have to endure and overcome all of these hardships to get what they need.
A benefit people can get from doing things they don’t enjoy is getting individual development.For instance,some art students who are good at subjects like literature,history,don’t have a good command of mathmetics.They will not spend any time on studying it.However,schools force them to learn things they don’t like-mathmetics,which definitely helps them develop a more logical way to think.In this sense,doing things people don’t enjoy contributes to individual improvement.
In some situations,people should do some unenjoyable things to fulfill their responsibilities.As a part of society,everyone has his/her own responsibilities related to his/her parents,children,job and so forth.Some parents might leave for a new neiborhood where all of their old friends are far away just to get a better environment for their children.Some children might abandon their chances to study abroad in order to look after their sick parents.
In fact,unenjoyable things always occur in people’s lives.What they need to do is making wise decisions, facing with the unpleasantness bravely and drawing lessons.In a nutshell,doing unenjoyable things are indispensable and they do change people’s lives in some positive ways.That’s why I believe people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
