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第一篇：
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning and give your comment on it.
As is vivdly revealed in the picture , there ia a special “football match” in the filed. An aged father was kicked out by his eldest son, and other there children are guarding their football doors. Apprently,they all don’t want to care for their father.
Undoubtedly ,the drawer of the cartoon is blarming these who didn’t want to look after their old and helpless parents. Nowadays, with the rapid steps of life, some people are busy with their bussinness and don’t have time to concern about their aged parents . Meanwhile, still some individuals aren’t willing to see after their parents due to their own interests. As a result, some senior citizens have to livewith their pets or lead a lonely and poor life. Briefly speaking, the mistreatment of the old is becoming a secious social problem frequently.
Awordingly, we should pay attention to this problem. Respecting the elders and taking care of aged parents are not only our duty ,but our traditional vitue. In my opinion ,it is necessary for us to take some measure .To bedin with, we should appreciate our parents and give them enough concern and financial assistance, importantly, spiritual warm. In addition, our society should accuse those who avoid their obligation and give them punishment by law. Last but not least , the authorities should concern about the life of the old and give them relevant assistance of law . Only in this way can we aurb the evil phenomenon revealed in the picture.
第二篇：
Directions:
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1.
describe the drawing.
2.
interpret its meaning, and
3.
support your view with examples.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
As is vivdly depicted in the cartoon. A running by with smile on his face have just arrived the eading, but his ending is also his beginning .
We are informed by the picture that the ending is also the beginning. According to the picure ,we can get two means, Firstly, our life is a long road . On the road, there are some different stages . When we complete one of the stage , the nest is waiting for us . so we should never stop ,Secondly , when we attain success ,we shouldn’t be proud , Because ,like a
ending ,your success means you have anther new beginning.
For instance ,we are facing graduation form our university , When we become a graduate , we just finish our life of college ,and will have a job in the society , which is really different from life in the school ,We should encourage ourself to begin the next step.
Similarly, when we gain success in our work ,weshould see the success as an ending , which is also our starting . We should barvely confornt the successive challenges .
Take a famous athlete for anther example .Peng yaping , a famous table tennis player , whose success due to her non-step efforts, she never step to enjoy her success, instead she always take her achievement as the
motivation of further progress .In sum, “never stop “ should be the righte attitude for everybody even for a cacntry .
