语速适中,节奏和语感都还好。而且时间拿捏的很准。
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1)中间夹杂着少量的uh, um之类的语气词。可能有时是为了buy time to think. 5 ?* K+ A. a0 M3 S
能避免则避免。3 v* e4 \3 Y! n9 W d3 R7 A
2)个别音的不准确。如: /l/ 可能受到母语的影响。place, play, player. /ai/ as in child.
2 k; _, T h U- @' a/ n& `3)个别词的用法和搭配还存在问题。如: honest 应改为honesty. learn knowledge 是中式表达。动词用 get, gain, obtain, acquire, capture都可以。2 v3 A d7 q1 H2 ] D0 a
4)个别语法还存在问题。如:I played basketball games since I was six years old. 应改为:I started to play basketball (games) when I was six years old. ) m9 G. n: e7 R6 D9 S8 A# s
或 I have played basketball (games) since I was six years old. ; q! O9 B/ h- L; u
' W, r3 m" o4 f4 l过去式会偶尔忽略。如: I had (not HAVE) to do everything by myself. 2 l/ S) x; d0 D; ^
3 m) e' I9 \4 i* B% H0 l总体感觉还不错。如果稍加注意这些细节问题,高分在望。加油!会成功!