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独立写作的一个问题

独立写作的一个问题

还有一个半月就考了,最近刚开始落实到笔头上,看过不少的经验,可第一段就遇到不小问题...我想用背景介绍式开篇,但是觉得写的有点多,怕不能符合老外的思维模式(既开门表明自己观点),会不会影响作文的第一印象?一般引入主题应写多少字呢?
还有,现在如何积累论据呢?时间实在比较紧迫了,但是效率还是不高,不知道该做什么...希望能有牛人帮我制定一个比较系统的复习写作的方案~~~thx~~~

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哎 我也是深有体会  如何积累论据

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没人管啊...

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应该可以背景开始吧.....我记得戴云的写作讲义里说可以

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看TWE185, 里头5分作文的开头基本都是开门见山, 背景几乎一带而过. 把你的论点突出来,我想这才是最重要的吧,至于用什么方式,只要不至于喧宾夺主就行

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开头一般有2个部分组成: hook(引子) + compare+ 提出自己的观点其中引子是拿高分重要一个重要手段. 往往容易写出两点. 考查大家如何提出自己论点的能力.hook: 的基本方法主要有:
1 background(history, definition);
eg: The history of computers can be traced back to nearly 4centuries ago. In the 17th sentury, a German scientist invented a machine that used wheels to do simply mathematic.
2 quotation
eg: Albert Einstein, the greatest physicist of the 20th century, famously commented,"I know not with what weapons..." if the proliferation of weapons of mass destruction is not curbed, the 21st century will look pretty much like the Stone Age3 question
eg: Whether should a restaurant be built in my community or not? I have to admit that's adifficult choice. After giving it some serious thought, I think the restaurant should be build
4 shocking statement
eg: Being a leader means being hated by your subordinates, hectic working days, crushing pressures, estranged family members, lost of countless sleeping hours, and a sure way to premature death!
5 Dramatic statistics/Facts
eg: It is scientific fact that the possibility of winning the jackpot of lottery equals that of being hit by a thunderbolt two times in a row at the same spot in 24 hours

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