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托福写作高分作文如何写

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摘要:托福写作高分作文人人都想拥有,但是高分是那么轻而易举就能获得的?没有两三把刷子怎么行的通,一起跟着小马余宛玉老师了解一下具体情况吧!

  主持人:余老师您好,一篇好的托福高分作文应该怎么写?

  余宛玉:托福写作高分作文,不仅有出彩的开头,文路完美的“body”,还必须有震撼整篇文章的结尾。因为结尾是往往起到一语值千金的作用,所以结尾部分如能恰如其分,恰到好处,就会给考官留下深刻印象,从而拿到一个高分。下面我们就从托福写作结尾的结构和意义及常用句型来探讨一下如何做到虎头“豹”尾,而不是“豹”尾。

  首先,根据整篇文章字数的分布,结尾部分一般需要写到 70-80个单词 ,用时 3-4分钟。那么,如何在如此有限的时间内写出一个“豹”尾来呢?下面我们从结尾的结构谈起。

  其次,文章的结尾一般分为三个部分,第一部分总结全文的观点;第二部分提出建议/指出文章观点的漏洞;第三部分展望未来。

  最后,我们结合实际题型进行实战演练。

  Sample 1:

  Improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country.(改善学校是一个国家成功发展最重要的因素)

  From what I have discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country. (总结全文)It is high time that parents, educators and the government made combined efforts to improve schools. (提出建议)Only in this way can we have a better and brighter future.(展望未来)

  Sample 2:

  A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life.(一个人的童年(从出生到12岁)是一生最重要的时期)

  On the basis of the above discussion, it is clarified that the statement that A is the most important factor for X cannot be applied to all cases.

  Having considered all the arguments above, what can be seen is that the statement that… is not always valid.

  All the above analysis go to show that the statement that…is partially correct/plausible/rational/reasonable/justifiable.

  In light of what has been discussed above, the argument that …doesn’t make sense in all cases.

  Overall, hardly can we still be confused at that…

  • It fails to take into consideration some special occasions where B and C are more indispensible for/when…

  • The mistake it makes is that it fails to see other factors, like B and C, which contribute more to X, especially for....

  Therefore, we are advised to remember that the decisive factor changes in different cases.

  It is the critical thinking that is called for when dealing with a complicated problem.

  Never/on no account/under no circumstances should we lose the spirit of critical thinking when analyzing the causes of a phenomenon.

  以上就是余宛玉老师给我们带来的托福写作高分作文的技巧,如果还有问题不妨点击我们的在线咨询,名师一一为你解答难题!

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